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What we didn’t like: Many plot details fall apart if you look too closely. First 50 pages were not great at setting up the reason why the main character would undertake her journey. If the book were longer it could have resolved some of these plot problems. You have to suspend disbelief to read it, similar to a sci-fi movie. Over-reliance on tropes, like the scar on the bad guy’s face. There was not enough info about the disease, about teleportation, and the philosophy that comes with those things. The near-rekindling of the romance between the main character and her ex was hard to take considering her ex was a jerk. The metaphysical description of the teleportation addiction could have been better explained or have been better grounded in science.

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